Feedback from Mr. Grimsley
The feedback I
received from sir was overall quite positive but his main criticism towards my
blog was that I should improve some of my posts by making them longer and
including more detail. Since I received this feedback I have tried my best to
improve my posts and make them more detailed and descriptive, my analysis for
Zombie land has also been improved. I still need to improve my Forest Gump analysis
and over the next few weeks I will get it done.
Since the feedback
I received, my attitude to the course has changed as I have gotten my posts
from a total of 9 to 17, which is a good improvement and has helped me realize the
importance of the blog as I can now look back and see what work is outstanding
and what work still needs to be done. It has provided me the opportunity to
consider posts that I was not told to do but that I think will be beneficial to
my project.. My aim for the rest of the course is to try to keep my blog up to
date and try to include as much detail in my posts as possible.
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